Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
There are people who believe that living in an apartment have more pros than a house. Such variation in people choices has always been a matter of debate. However, I strongly disagree with those who think that apartments are far better than houses.
On one hand, some people elect apartments over houses for some of these minor reasons. Firstly, apartments are considered safer than houses. Particularly, in every floor of the building there are several apartments, therefore people imagine that its safer to be close to others. Secondly, houses cost handsome amount of money with respect to apartments. For example, last Sunday I came across an advertisement of newly built apartments which cost was extremely nominal. Lastly, you can be choosier with apartments. To illustrate, one of my friend in Dubai is residing in an apartment just because it is on floor number forty eight, thus it enables him to enjoy the view of beach and sunrise.
On the other hand, other wiser people prefer house as their prime residence. To begin with, houses are generally more spacious and can be the most feasible solution for giant families. As an example, multi-story house or house with numerous rooms can manage more people under the roof, other than that there is even an adequate amount of space for car parking and garden. Moreover, in a house noise factor is considerably lower than in apartment. For instance, generally houses are not in very congested or commercial areas, so the noise pollution is significantly lower. Furthermore, for people who are more sensitive with their privacy should live in a house. Such as, in Pakistan normally houses are surrounded by tall boundary walls and gigantic steel gates.
To conclude, some inconsiderable advantages of apartments cannot deny the fact that houses have more to offer that apartments, as it have more space, privacy and calm environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: forty-eight
...ment just because it is on floor number forty eight, thus it enables him to enjoy the view ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09646302251 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68912194718 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575562700965 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0135478971 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37547873763 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106697593214 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985743101756 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216537034751 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656320815953 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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