Some people prefer to live in a house while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment??
There is no harm in saying that the topic “comparison of house and apartment living” grabs immediate attention owing to its uniqueness. There are two schools of thoughts for this argument, to be clearer, there are two dimensions. One group of people asserts that it is more beneficial to live in a house, whereas, the other group is of the opinion that living in an apartment outweighs the advantages. I believe it’s a matter of personal choice and priorities. I personally prefer living in a house rather than apartment. Let’s discuss both opinions in detail to reach a conclusive understanding.
Evidently, mostly people opts in for living in a instead of apartment as there are enormous advantages intact to it. For instance, choice of living standard, construction structure and personal space. I would like to share my personal experience here; I am currently living in a 10 Marla’s house with a big garage and enough space for laundry at the backside as well. Rooms are spacious enough and house is built in such a rational way that it has cross ventilation system.Furthermore,there is a small lawn side where I can grow different sorts of vegetables, fruits and plants. These are the perks I enjoy having my own house.
On the contrary, certain person likes to live in an apartment. It has been observed that apartment living is mostly a choice of students, people living alone distant from family etc. The obvious reasons for living in an apartment are security, maintenance and cost of living. I have had the experience of living in an apartment for sometime and I don’t really cherish that time much. During humid seasons, I had difficulty breathing due to suffocation. One of the bigger issues is parking. In most of the buildings, no designated slot is allotted to residents and it functions on first come first basis.
To recapitulate the aforementioned topic, both accommodations have their own strong sides.such as personal space, however; I personally believe that living in a house outweigh apartment living due to privacy and choice of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, well, whereas, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08405797101 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16500503614 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542028985507 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9830893421 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3157894737 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418556030503 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127773216091 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121262001391 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252706024238 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584272572345 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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