Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
living pattern present the person's nature and their social activities. Different societies have distinctive style of living. Some people prefer to live in open house, while other choose to live in apartments. this essay will discuss both advantages and disadvanteages of living in buildings or houses.
in urban areas, complex-apartment are popular as compare to open-houses. In cities, population ratio is higher and government needs to accommodates all so flats system is more convenient and in one buildings hundreds of familines can live with ease. many large cities of the world having same standards living culture. For example, in United Arab Emirates, 75% people are living in apartments and facilities by all necessities of life near by, I am one of these residences, apartments are affordable and low-income earner can own it by paying installments in many years.
on the other hand, houses are more open and its a separate family living system which covers most of land area for only one family, as world's population growing, its a high time to think about it and utilize land surface smartly and distribute among people accordingly and one more disadvantage of houses they are more expensive people have to pay alot for it. A good illustration of this is, a hundred acres of land can give shelter to thousands' families but a single 2000 yards of banglow used by one family where minimum 10-12 families can reside easily, in addition expenses are huge as compare to flats systems.
In conclusion, both places are for living and providing home to seven and a half billions of people is a challanging task so government and authorities worlwide needs to take initiative to accomodate all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11743772242 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88122635007 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608540925267 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.832374773 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.727272727 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352273144635 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135067643685 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11434469514 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207096849393 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106096032178 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.