Nowadays human being have a chose to have a right to choose the place to live, whether it is a privet house or an apartment. Both of those options have prone and cons, depending on following factors: country, level of income, age category and their life style.
To begin with, significant advantage go buying a house is that people who do it are aimed at a big family. Thereby you can own a big territory and breathe fresh air, all the leads to healthier life and also provide safety for you children. Owning a house, that means you buy a free piece of land. Therefore this gives you opportunities to built whatever you want, rely on your own architectural vision. For instance, you have a chance to design special premises with various facilities such as sauna, swimming pool or construct rooms with double-light.
From another hand, people also have an option to buy a flat. Surely, people modify their apartment according to their taste, however they can not increase the number of meters or rebuilt something significantly. But at the same time, it does not take a lot of energy to look after a flat in comparison with a house. From financial point of view, despite an apartment in the city initially is more expensive then a house outside, but subsequent maintaining cost of a house are much higher. Another benefit is that block of flats are more commonly situated closer to the city, thus commuting to work is much easier.
In conclusion, i should say that both variants have benefits and drawbacks. Every human being should make an individual choice for comfortable life. But obviously having both a house and an apartment, seems to be a perfect option.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231481481481 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0833333333333 0.0946595960268 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0555555555556 0.0501214627716 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0432098765432 0.0437548338989 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0987654320988 0.122226691241 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0401234567901 0.0403226058552 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6434853868 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0401234567901 0.0326793684256 123% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.108024691358 0.0861772015684 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0123456790123 0.021408717616 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00925925925926 0.011925033212 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1679.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80968858131 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318339100346 0.374742101984 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231833910035 0.28420135186 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159169550173 0.203846283523 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114186851211 0.137316102897 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6434853868 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629757785467 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 72.2317331953 60.7387585426 119% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2666666667 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.081601423 49.517814964 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.933333333 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.814263465372 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 42.4500576701 49.1944974215 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.39534883721 1.69124875643 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29882195723 0.332605444948 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0826551120604 0.102741220458 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0595528495705 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.492799468857 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0848021298296 0.148594505496 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105647208865 0.134430193775 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656727333805 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.175470920032 0.324371583561 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0290472644956 0.0638462369009 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180528438055 0.228012699653 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690039456877 0.058150111329 119% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.