Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully.
Others disagree. Discuss both views, and give you opinion.
The utilization of leisure time is always depends on individual nature and personal preference. To which, a few people love to organize a timetable for the things they want to do during time off, while others do not indulge in planning and they choose to do whatever comes on their mind first. In my opinion, although it is sometimes acceptable to spend free time carelessly, panning is essential to use time effectively.
To begin with, planning a spare time gives crystal clear understanding about what can be achieved in the particular duration of time, rather than wandering over things mindlessly. It allows people to identify areas where they really should focus, which eventually gives confidence and on completion, a sense of accomplishment. For instance, people who plan their vacation well and in advance tend to enjoy more than one who does not. On the other hand, lack of planning only result into procrastination and prevent from doing any activity at all. Thus, proper planning is beneficial to take full advantage of time off.
However, people are not always keen on participating in several events in their free time and they want to take life as a surprise. For them, a planning is simply an overburden, which they really want to avoid on their time off from work and choose to go with the flow that embarks in their ways. Furthermore, it provides them time to focus only on few most important activities, which are extremely enjoyable, instead of taking pressure to complete multiple tasks during leisure time. For instance, most individual just love to read their favorite novel during the whole time so they don’t seem to need any planning. Thus, planning a free time is simply a waste of time for many persons.
In conclusion, both the approaches have pros and cons, so people can choose however they want to spend their time, but to use it efficiently, people should be encouraged towards proper organization. Hence, time should not be wasted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...urprise. For them, a planning is simply an overburden, which they really want to avoid on the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96385542169 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74425196659 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557228915663 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2703497674 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.866666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273683187683 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100483055335 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432763200009 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173465985593 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029935833964 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.