Having off from your daily routine and go for holidays in another country is a best way to relax and refresh yourself. Some people like to stay in the hotel during their vacation where things get arranged for them instead of looking around the cultural activities. But others believe wandering around every corner of the country for enjoy the traditional recipes and local living, they visit. I shall illustrate both views thoughts in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, visiting different countries in the vacation period is usual these days. This way you can get some time to enjoy your free time away from your daily life. In addition, you can enjoy variety of traditional activities of the country you are staying including getting knowledge of local traditions, food and customs. Moreover, you can meet different people to socialise and knowing about their culture. They will know the difference between their traditions and other country. it gives them adventures experience to going out from the hotel and looking around for local places to visit such as museums, zoos and local stores for try out local cloths etc.
On the other hand, some people enjoy staying in the hotel because they just want to relax from their busy lives. Also, they do not prefer going out and meeting with the local community as they are tired of talking. sometimes, they only take off from their work so they can refresh their mind while sitting alone and meditating.
To summarise, people who visit all the places in the country they are visiting are asset to the country's economy and culture. But those who don't pay much time to visit local places and local community, are gave little to local nation.
- Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.Do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people prefer to spend their holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their cu 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, while, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93031358885 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29336592138 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550522648084 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.905878621 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322760731744 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112935723529 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700910764552 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206574924788 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646945299081 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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