The prompt asserts that certain group of people think that advertising is brilliantly successful at convincing customers to purchase commodities, whereas, another demographics of people consider that advertising has become so ubiquitus that no one pay attention to it. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the former opinion, however in some instances, the latter is true.
Firstly, advent of social medias have formed various new platforms or avenues for advertising. Twenty years ago, there was an influx of advertising over the internet mostly through google or any other search engines' browse page. But, slowly the ads are integrated into every sites of internet. For example, youtube is a video streaming platform which has trillions of videos of veriety of contents. At present, it is being used as advertising platform in the same way as television. And, these rapid growth in advertising that lasts three to five seconds, in contrast to normal duration of advertisement which is 30-130 seconds long, are creating new customer base. Most of the common advertising are in youtube because of their success such ase PUBG ( a massive online player game), grammarly ( an app that corrects your grammar through any platform), and many more. Even, I was influenced by the ad of grammarly and purchased it. Not only youtube, ads are spreading through any new mediums such as facebook( an original social media), instagram ( photo sharing social media), TikTok ( short video sharing app), Reddit ( a social media), and many others. And using the database of profiles through these apps, the ads can be used as target based on the customers that is regarded as having the most success at present. To illustrate, if anyone with a account in facebook, search for shoes or perfumes, then there will be more ads about only in that categories which are shoes and perfumes. Therefore, the first opinion is true that advertising is crucially successful when it comes to persuading customers.
However, there are a few cases where advertisements are not that effective. To illustrate, there are barely any advertisement about "google chrome" which is a browser that most people use to surf through internet. The main reason is, it is superior than any other browsers in every aspect such as speed, efficiency, and stability. Another example, Barcelona FC ( football club ) does not advertise about their jerseys, boots , or any other products that are sold worldwide. The primary reason is that thousands of people watch the club's matches on every weekends, and these matches themselves work as advertisements. As one of the best players of the history of football named Lionel Messi plays for this club and for only this reason there is a net profit over 10 million dollars only from this perticular player's jersey sale. But, as there are few caveats when the advertisements are not needed because these products are either way too good that people do not need reminders or they are universally known.
In conclusion, in the first place, advertisements were invented to convince customers to buy their products. If the objective of advertisements was not achieved, then it would had been abolished many years ago. As advertisement is still a thing proves that it is effective. In some instances, advertisements do not have that much effect, still there are residual effects even if the customers are not amazed instaneously. Therefore, advertisements hold too much significance in the business world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in my opinion, in the first place, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 13.1623246493 289% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 7.30460921844 315% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2921.0 1615.20841683 181% => OK
No of words: 565.0 315.596192385 179% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16991150442 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87542086881 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86318581928 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 296.0 176.041082164 168% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52389380531 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 914.4 506.74238477 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5934502188 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.346153846 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7307692308 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256535133935 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681900375292 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629015334529 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174439885246 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729960892286 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 78.4519038076 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.