some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Dicuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Sports facilities favour the improvement in public health is believed by many individuals and considered an excellent path. Rest of them think that this will result in limited improvement and other steps are required. In my opinion, games benefits mostly the athletes not the general public, therefore, other measures like awareness camps and clubs like the fitness centre can play a better role.
Firstly, It is irrefutable that athletes are always in perfect shape and healthy, but the only small portion of the population from the region takes part in sports events like cricket, footballs which helps them in maintaining physical body. Furthermore, it depends on the person willing to join sports centres to play games which support their fitness. Hence, these platforms cannot guarantee improvement in the health of the general public.
Secondly, various other measures can be taken to promote health awareness in the society by doctors aided camps to guide the public about optimum use of fruits and vegetables and their related diet. Moreover, keeping the society updated with the symptoms of seasonal infections such as malaria, common death cause during rainy seasons in India. As well as encouraging people to take morning walks and do some exercise like yoga activities on daily basis.
In conclusion, public health is a serious concern in every community especially with the rise of new infections like swine flu. Sports centres can play an important role but with a limited number of individuals. Therefore, the spread of knowledge about the infections and how to take preventing actions is a necessity with the right guidelines from the educated person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2808988764 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62524108503 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614232209738 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2639618566 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196807509632 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074979968695 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617164752101 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117443857421 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437581462711 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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