Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Some would argue that by facilitating indoor or outdoor sports the health conditions are enhanced, while others would argue that this is not enough and other initiatives are essential for a healthy individual. While improving sports infrastructure is a beneficial and easy way, I believe that educating the next generations about their daily food intake is the best method.
On the one hand, playing games, swimming, exercising, and cycling makes the body fit and active, an individual who involves in these activities feels himself mentally strong and physically sound as most of his extra calories are burned out while exercising or cycling. For example, in Germany when new sports clubs were inaugurated in every nook and cranny, there was a steady rise in potential health by 25%. However, I believe that other steps should also be taken by the individual himself for better well-being.
On the other hand, a long term solution for excellent health is to educate young people about the dangers of consuming unhealthy foods irresponsibly. Children in schools could be taught to keep an eye on their daily food intake and they should be well-groomed, the side-effects of packaged drinks and processed food-stuffs which have adverse effects on their mental, physical and emotional well-being, moreover these students are more likely to teach their parents and consequently, the adults will also be influenced by this initiative. School children in the Netherlands, for instance, were taught about ill-effects of unhygienic meals and now they have one of the increased public health conditions in the world.
In conclusion, although improving sports facilities play a major role in achieving a perfect mind and body, educating the youngsters about healthy food items has a greater impact on overall well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36236933798 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87135920974 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4417248952 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.0 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8888888889 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7777777778 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201308344764 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830805697401 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568603283497 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111148665617 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664511803799 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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