Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays myriad people are aware about health due to ample number of reasons. Apart from this, there are extreme number of organizations also camping about health and motivate the people to stay fit. Some proponent discuss and claim that sports facilities must be provided to public for their fitness.
Despite, number of people conflict this perspective that this have little effect on public health however, they should have to take other effective measures.
firstly, expert who believe that general sports academy have not that much of effect on public, they claim some reasons. For an example, in current era most of the people have busy schedule catalyses they find it very difficult to spend some time on sports academy. In follow that, some eye catching measures must be taken by experts. To illustrate, this
some online fitness class could be provided by people for all time so that public can use it anywhere and anytime.
Whereas, most of the individuals claim that massive sports facilities must be helpful for the to the people who are very concerned about their fitness. For an instance, public sports class with less fees as well as in convenient time open for all sort of people so they use it. In addition, academy with attractive scheme such as free membership catch immense number of people and they keep themselves fit.
To sum up, there are numerous people opt that sports facilities does not impose to them for stay fit. However, epic number of people believe that sports academy improve public health. I see eye to eye, if the public sports facilities is durable then tremendous people stay healthy by using it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
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Line 4, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...irstly, expert who believe that general sports academy have not that much of effect on...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...it very difficult to spend some time on sports academy. In follow that, some eye catch...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun fees is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...r an instance, public sports class with less fees as well as in convenient time open...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, well, whereas, apart from, in addition, sort of, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98913043478 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31780717462 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5429955402 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312136220185 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124252440287 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798651956132 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186878632169 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849676261113 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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