Some people say that cities are a better place children to grow up in,while others believe countryside is the right choice.Discuss both views,give own opinion and examples
There are different opinions on this.Some people believe that the best place for kids to grow is the city, while others say living in the countryside and around the city has many options for children.I think each of these has its benefits and disadvantages that I will mention in the following paragraphs.
Many times you may think urban life is more better than living in the village. But urban and rural life each have their own advantages and disadvantages. Living in the city is much easier, of course, as you have more opportunities to grow. There are many amenities in the city and you will have more opportunities to make money. Children living in the city can benefit from good education because the schools in the city are more better than the rural schools. When someone gets sick. There are many more public and private hospitals in the city that can be treated. Large shopping malls, various banks, work offices, movie theaters, hotels, restaurants and recreation centers are among the other amenities in the city. Transportation facilities in the city are more better than the countryside, and urban residents have access to electricity, highways and communications. So people can have a comfortable and enjoyable life in the city.
On the other hand, rural life has different benefits. The main thing is that the people of the village live in unity and peace. They make very hard money and earn enough to make a living. That is why they are less competitive than each other. And because they have a smaller community, they have more friends. Rural people usually try to protect their habits and culture. The village has a clean and beautiful environment and there is no noise and noise, which is why it is less polluted, there are not many vehicles in the village, so the streets are less afraid of cycling. Villagers can use fresh vegetables and fruits.The villagers have fewer ethical problems, so the crime rate in the village is very low and there are not many robberies and murders. The countryside is pleasant and peaceful with stunning scenery.
To sum to,I think even though the village has many options for a healthy life, the city is a better place to grow and develop children's talents.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-18 | erman.duran95 | 56 | view |
- Some people believe that preserving natural environment is crucial, however, most make no effort to do so.Why do you think this is happening?What are some simple actions that could help the environment? 78
- With all the problems in the world today spending money on space exploration is a complete waste The money could be better spent on other causes 87
- Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home.Why do you think it happens?What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice? 61
- You have stayed at a friend’s house last weekend and forgot your watch there.Write a letter to him/her and say Thank him/her for the weekend stay.Describe your watch and where you could have left it.Suggest a way how to get it back.َ 73
- The local government is planning to change the bus timetable.You are not happy about the proposed changes.Write a letter to the newspaper.In the letter describe the changes explain how they will affect you say how you would improve the service. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
There are different opinions on this.Some people believe that the best place for ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... the city has many options for children.I think each of these has its benefits an...
^
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
... Many times you may think urban life is more better than living in the village. But urban a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ion because the schools in the city are more better than the rural schools. When someone ge...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are more better than the rural schools. When someone gets sick. There are many more ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 763, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ansportation facilities in the city are more better than the countryside, and urban residen...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 623, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ers can use fresh vegetables and fruits.The villagers have fewer ethical problems, ...
^^^
Line 11, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ul with stunning scenery. To sum to,I think even though the village has many ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, i think, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87598944591 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59380846038 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482849604222 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2566424564 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0476190476 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95238095238 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166498951302 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486337228535 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512992546876 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127982348473 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621618744353 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.