When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that urban designers should focus more on building sports centers and parks than shopping centers when building a new city.I will state my reasons for the importance of all the things stated in the following paragraphs.
Given the advancement of technology in society and the fact that most of the work today is done by robots and machines. The role of exercise in human life is more pronounced.This need is heightened when I see that most people live in low-rise apartments in cities and that kids and even adults have no place to do sports.The existence of public parks is important because it is a place for leisure time for the community, and in recent years there have been grassroots groups that do daily activities at no cost. And this increases public health and solidarity.
On the other hand,Although parks and sports centers are important, we want to focus on the importance of shopping malls.First,Because of the many occupations in people's lives. The availability of shopping malls is of particular importance.Because people do their shopping with great ease and convenience. And we see its impact on people's lives as having time to do other things or to spend time with other family members.Second, people in the community use less means of transportation, which reduces gasoline and air pollution and reduces traffic. And also a shopping mall will bring a lot of people to work, which means success in creating jobs.As a result, all of this contributes to the growth of financial growth in society and helps governments spend their budgets on other things.
In conclusion,I believe that not only is the existence of sports facilities and parks a necessity of urban life, but the existence of shopping malls is just as important in cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01683501684 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0264996708 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531986531987 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.6296222252 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.555555556 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340902106892 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123582923615 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792832606369 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194114639899 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641382802517 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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