Some people say death penalty should not be given even to murderers. They are of the option that putting in prison for a long time is a better way of punishment. What is your opinion?
It is the belief of few people that even the murderers not be punished with death sentence but be termed with prolonged duration of imprisonment. I completely agree with this view as many first-time convicts commit crimes without any real criminal intention and deserve a chance for rehabilitation.
Not all but many first-time law offenders, be it a thief or murderer, commit offenses without the intention to do so. People often violate law as a need of the minute, and same is the case with some serious offenses, too. Being left out without any choice than to commit the crime, despite knowing its results, makes people criminals circumstantially. The Times has reported that 90% of convicted murderers in Michigan prisons are first timers, and their case files, too, have not suggested of intentions and plans beforehand. Thus, the majority of convicts do not deserve life ending punishments, rather an increased duration of imprisonment.
That being said, rehabilitation during the period of prison life allows these convicts to realise the magnitude of their mistakes. Since most of them are new to committing crimes and are aware of the consequences of violation of law, chances of them being prevented from repeating the offences is quite high, unlike serial law breakers. This is supported by a study conducted by Oxford University in New York prison, in which they claim that as prisoners made to undergo more hours of rhabilitation program, less number of them have repeated the offense after their release and, consequently, proving the effectiveness of rehabilitation during imprisonment.
To conclude, many people believe that death sentences should not be offered to any criminal regardless of the seriousness of their crime, but they prefer longer duration as punishment as it provides time for realisation and rehabilitation. I, too, believe in the same
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n Michigan prisons are first timers, and their case files, too, have not suggeste...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02717139698 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0889505401 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.25 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163780814087 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599761742164 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478003706234 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110676659254 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329506047639 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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