Some people say that with the development of modern technology, printed books, newspapers and magazines lose their importance. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Technology is developing day to day. It is believed by some people that technological advancement leads to the reduction of printed material. I also strongly believe the same as it has multiple benefits. This essay will elaborate on my opinion in detail and will provide a logical conclusion.
The demand and supply of offline paper will get reduced if Automation is implemented. To begin with, e-books are portable to carry anywhere unlike printed books. Pupils can use laptops or tablets for writing, reading as well as accessing online books. This will not only reduce the burden of the books on students but also increase their willingness to attend school regularly every day. For Instance, a growing research body has recently stated that students are likely to join schools, which allow laptops for study. In fact, it is easy to learn by observing the pictures. Moreover, with the help of the internet, people can get information anywhere, any time across the world without spending money.
In addition, the Environment restores with the development of Automation. Deforestation tends to reduce slowly. For Example, a recent report published by The Times Of New York stated that the dependency on trees for papermaking has been reduced considerably compared to the past few years. Finally, the productivity of employees will be increased by eliminating unnecessary time searching for documents and consuming office space from books pile up. This improves client service.
To Conclude, the reasons have been elaborated. I would like to reiterate that technical growth benefits not only society but also the Environment.Thus, the positive outcomes make the world think beyond origins.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40671641791 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89087130294 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660447761194 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.158739225 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147528056728 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457666742869 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573944741383 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777964841115 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499519185714 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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