Some people say that good diet and regular exercise are not necessary for a long and healthy life.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Importance of physical workout and eating habits can be called subjective if nourishing life is questioned. I totally favor the statement in question prompt and will illustrate reasons behind my opinion in subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, happy and prosperous life can be linked with mental health which is in negative co-relation with stress. The pressure, which could stem from any factor such as drudgery and societal insecurities, can lead to serious issues causing depression, anxiety and other mental illnesses. These elements have significant contribution to one's well-being and lessening these would certainly increase the life standard. For the sake of this reason, Bhutan has a Ministry of Happiness, which solve aforementioned issues, making the country population as 98% happy if decided on the basis of standards set by United Nations.
Secondly, environmental problems, such as air pollution, have drastic impact on life. To explain more, the surrounding conditions can have both negative and positive effects, which if not appropriate, need to be solved to increase longevity and to encourage good life. For example, while the people in giant metropolitan cities suffer from various unprecedented diseases such as asthma and even cancer, people living on countryside are less-likely to face those. Furthermore, land or soil pollution can even affect the vegetation which is grown and later used as food.
Admittedly, exercise and nutritious food does bring positive results but with the involvement in busy work-routine in this era that everybody has to face, the requirement of muscle activity is full filled.
In conclusion, extrapolating results from the nuanced views provided, it is clear that other issues, namely stress and pollution, are prime factors for flourishing living, and need to be resolved to improve quality of life.
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- Should old people live with the family or separately with same aged people 72
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- By paying more to employees based on their performance level you can keep their motivation high Do you agree this is the best way to encourage employees 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56690140845 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98882689248 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658450704225 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8756622719 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0867909539357 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300444066632 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221662236506 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441694578296 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224326288174 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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