Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
The government spending money on construction of theatres and stadiums is not encouraged by some part of the public. also, I strongly agree that money on medical treatments and education must be upsurge by the government to increase the economic growth of the nation, improves the facilities on government firms and enhances the nation's pride.
To Embark on, nowadays people are expecting the government to provide more facilities for health care. this is expected because they cannot rely on private sectors who work based on money concern. this, in turn, affects mainly lower and middle-class people who cannot afford a huge amount of money. In addition, the government should not fund on the entertainment which is already done by most private sectors. Moreover, this doesn't help every citizen who is yet waiting for basic needs to live a life. For instance, recently my neighbour, a middle-class person, had an accident and he suffered from the leg fracture, the amount required for the operation is 1 lakh which should be operated by the plate, but facilities to operate with the plate is not available in the government hospital
Secondly, education is the next important sector society which provides major revenue, the government should provide enough facilities for children who are poor. also, education should not be like a business to gain profit, it should increase the value of the children and enhance their life to achieve success. Furthermore, there are some children who are not able to get a good education because of poor teachers and infrastructure in school. To illustrate, a fire accident in one of the schools in Kumbakonam had killed nearly 200-250 children because of poor infrastructure by the government with illegal authorizations.
To recapitulate, we live in a democratic nation where the basic needs should be provided by the government and they should take responsibility for every individual citizen. With these improvements in the above sectors, one day we can reach the pinnacle and can be listed as one of the great countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e listed as one of the great countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1755952381 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91903299295 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.2387023789 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.769230769 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22851312588 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864323162949 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623292524996 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13946079338 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542567417026 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.