Consumption of healthy food is a key factor of having a healthy society. Subsidised the fruits and vegetables, as well as putting taxes on unhealthy foods may help in different ways having that expected healthy society. I will discuss regarding both points in this essay.
Due to many reasons, the price of fruits and vegetables are gone higher compare to past prices of them. It has affected on peoples life styles with some remarkable drawbacks such as reducing the chance of consuming healthy fruits and vegetables. If government subsidised those, then the price will be go down in considerable amounts, because the sellers are getting some relief on there expenses, hence every one will be able to get a chance to buy those for a minimum price and to add those to their daily meals. Mainly it will be a good thing for people who are getting an average payment as their salary.
The other thing is adding some taxes on the unhealthy food will definitely reduced the consumption of those products. If government able to add taxes on fast foods and junk foods, then the price will go higher and it will affect on most of the customers in bad way, with regarding their expenses. That mean the selling of those foods will go down. Since those foods are affecting in human body in bad manner, by reasoning for numerous of diseases, the falling amount of consumption will reduced the number of health problems peoples have to deal with.
In conclusion, I think both procedures are affecting in good manner for having a healthy life. What ever the action taking by government will affect in success manner on peoples life moreover it is a responsibility of human to have healthy food for their meal to gain a good health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73666666667 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54094251979 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503333333333 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9292400182 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221964266425 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947163319561 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477083263628 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14585485727 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407611039865 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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