Should students be allowed to choose their field of study?. is science and technology only the relevant subjects to read and learn?. The battle between the science and liberal arts stream rages on, with the world favoring the former than the latter.People prefer to hail, worship and favour technology considering its widespread presence. Furthermore, the first choice for a 'bright' student must belong to these fields. Otherwise, they are either considered dull-witted or too easy-going. Yet, the question remains is smartness defined by my passion. Can there be any field of study barring the sciences.
The obvious answer is yes, true that sciences are fairly prevalent, but certainly it does not encompass everything. The arts are also an important aspect of life. if the course curriculum is built to envision the link between the fields then it is useful. A larger framework with more particular options to choose from is the best of both worlds.
For instance, consider a doctor who needs to handle minimum 10 to 15 patients on a daily basis, if he is unable to manage his time and resources will he be capable of doing so?. Another example is a statistician who is trying to understand a complex algorithm for say a research purpose, without the required business case will this research be of any relevance.
In these instances we are able to infer the connection between sciences and arts like medicine and management or business driven research. Hence, it becomes quite clear that a guided choice continues to be the best resolve.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011. 61
- the table shows how many people used different form public transport in million between 2010 and 2014. 56
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 56
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 67
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03112840467 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71466527606 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661478599222 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.348826396 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114407368227 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330203917771 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401785034274 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603009948823 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331970937726 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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