Some people opine that History is the most significant school lesson, while others believe that Science and Technology are the most crucial school subjects. I completely agree with both views that both lectures are equally important.
History is a school subject which teaches about past occurrences, which can include invention, colonialism and independence. From these past events, there are a lot of valuable life lessons which can be applied in today's life. For instance, as an Indonesian, I was taught with the struggle and striving attitude of Indonesian warriors when attempting to reach Indonesia's independence. Although taken from past experiences, the struggle and striving life value is still applicable in my daily life, especially during my fight to reach my dream.
Meanwhile. Science and Technology are subjects which mainly teach about high technology-related things. These lessons are taught to prepare students to utilize technology effectively. For example, as a student I was taught about how to use Microsoft Excel during Information Technology subject in my school. Several years later when I have become university student, I found that this lesson is useful in processing my thesis data using more advanced software named e-Views. This is because the Microsoft Excel lesson in the past have become my foundation in using other more advanced software.
In conclusion, I agree that both History and Science and Technology subjects are equally important, because History teaches about past occurrences which contain a lot of life lessons which can be applied in today's life, and Science and Technology subjects prepare students to utilize technology effectively.
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- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
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- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...esias independence. Although taken from past experiences, the struggle and striving life value i...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
... during my fight to reach my dream. Meanwhile. Science and Technology are subjects wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53667953668 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90434760564 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509652509653 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1760555931 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225604279586 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091515798563 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842048641758 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1696431376 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897610274511 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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