Be it home or office, the importance of hygiene and aesthetics of our surroundings is taking a special interest by the masses. While some argue that it is not very beneficial to stay organized and keep our working space as well living space clean, I think otherwise. In this essay, I will discuss my views on the importance of staying organized and keeping our local environment clean.
Firstly, it is scientifically established fact that when we spend our time around places that are tidy and well-organized, it helps our brain to function more effectively. While it is mainly because of the peace of mind such setup offers, the human brain also tends to be more focused in order to fulfill our dreams by achieving the timebound goals. As per the survey conducted by Forbes magazine, 90% of the top leaders admitted that staying organized helped them in their journey and is an effective habit that can make anyone reach greater heights in their life.
Secondly, such behavior portrays the way we treat ourselves. Although some would still debate this aspect, psychologists have been repeatedly providing sufficient evidence on how staying tidy and organized helps in boosting the self confidence of an individual. Not only confidence levels are impacted, but it also makes them more respectful. Additionally, for people who are in relationships, such behavior is shown to inspire their respective partners to practice such habits eventually fostering a healthy relation.
To conclude, some may show least interest in keeping their home and workplace pleasant, and well-structured as they may not be realising what benefits this can bring them. In my opinion, it is one of the effective habits that helps in self improvement and spreads positive aura around. People should be made aware of the groundbreaking research that is going on and its outcomes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12828947368 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91355835395 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8551875457 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.923076923 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16883636236 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525533333511 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454355816099 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975199560991 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433009325062 0.056905535591 76% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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