Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest to work as a volunteer at the Victoria Museum located near Chennai Central Railway Station. Since my college times, I have been a great admirer of the concept behind museums because of the way they help in nurturing the society. I believe that community service is essential, for it helping the locals as well as enriching my own personality.
I am a Physics teacher by profession and I enjoy when my students pose questions with reference to the subject. I am known for my patience and compassion. The department on Science experiments for children is something that makes your museum unique. In my view, these skills would turn out very helpful when dealing with visitors in the museum.
I would be occupied on weekdays with my current job. However, I am available over the weekends, particularly from 10 AM to 4 PM on both Saturday and Sunday, except for the second week of the month as I will be busy with some personal work.
Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Shyam
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uestions with reference to the subject. I am known for my patience and compassion...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, so, well, except for, as well as, in my view, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75268817204 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65299565408 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688172043011 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4309293701 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3636363636 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187542430027 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689910852304 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492709125204 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982792939243 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357952347287 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uestions with reference to the subject. I am known for my patience and compassion...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, so, well, except for, as well as, in my view, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75268817204 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65299565408 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688172043011 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4309293701 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3636363636 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187542430027 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689910852304 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492709125204 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982792939243 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357952347287 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.