some people say that is important to keep your home and workplace tidy with everything organized and in the correct place

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some people say that is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place

Staying organized and well-presented is quite important for everyone. Regardless of the place whether it is home or workplace, things should be placed in order. I completely agree to this fact; as it shows how well-mannered and groomed we are, as human beings. Apart from this being essential, staying disciplined and well planned has numerous advantages. The following paragraphs will further enlighten the importance.
At elementary level, we are taught to keep our books and accessories in correct precedence, because these are basic manners. For instance if we are at home and things are cluttered, it certainly does not look good to the people coming from outside. The first impression of the house owner would be very strange and unpleasant. Furthermore, keeping things at random places will result in wastage of time , as a lot of time will be spent to search a particular item. Hygienically, it is not encouraged to keep things in scattered way as rubbish will pave way for viral infections.
To elucidate it further, at workplace, if a client is coming for a meeting and table is not tidy up it would leave a very bad impression. People organized at workplace shows the level of maturity and professionalism. Our small gestures can change our perceptions. One evident disadvantage of being disordered is that if we keep randomly putting files and important documents it would get us into a crucial problem when management would require any of that document.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, being in order is not something to learn from books rather it’s a personality trait that matures with time and experience. It is of paramount importance to stay disciplined and systematized in every role; be it personal or professional.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, so, well, apart from, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15034965035 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14839935633 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594405594406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3748015868 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158002409356 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494020012469 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508741899912 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862668395075 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207886970361 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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