Some people say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together.To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?
In today's world, with the advent of technology, everything has become easier. Especially with the invention of the Internet, where all people are connected to wherever they live, making communication between them easier.I will state my opinion in the following paragraphs.
Internet is undoubtedly one of the great inventions of people. The most important thing that makes us care about our smart devices is the use of the Internet.The Internet fosters social relationships, especially in times of crisis and when people use the Internet to bring together a social force from the groups they interact with.Research shows that while modern technology users are less likely to interact with local groups, their networks are crossing geographical boundaries and spanning an infinite range.This characteristic creates a new definition of the concept of 'community'. Instead of relying on just one specific group to meet their social needs, people are now actively seeking a diverse set of people and resources for a variety of situations.
It's true that the Internet has a tremendous role to play in enhancing social relationships.But the damage caused by incorrect use of these networks is today very significant in societies. From illegitimate relationships and infidelity to spousal infiltration of families, all are damages that may never be remedied. Following these effects, there are other grave consequences, including emotional failures that lead to the gradual death of people and thus the spirits and vitality of society. Other damaging effects of these communication tools are the increase in the divorce rate, which diminishes the credibility and spiritual values of societies.
In conclusion,I believe that using the Internet is a two-way coin that can simultaneously have negative or good effects on human relationships.That these effects are progressing in parallel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61324041812 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19898580488 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627177700348 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.220630509 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.1 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274370429389 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958613836226 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717026445677 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150546288889 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998639897555 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.85 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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