Your university lecturer gave you an assignment.You won’t be able to submit your assignment on time.Write to your lecturer asking for an extension.In the letter: describe the situation explain why your assignment will be late say when you will be able to hand in your assignment
I'm your student in sports management at the College of Physical Education.I am writing a letter requesting you for Monday's homework last week.
You said the deadline for delivery was two weeks later, July 7th.But I can't give you my homework on time. I apologize for the delay.And I hope I can make up for this delay.
MAs you know, I work as a manager at a sports club near my home.This year's volleyball state championships at this stadium I am working on, so my responsibility has increased and I do not have enough time to do my homework.Because I have to do club repairs, such as cleaning, repairing chairs,and buying sports equipment and prizes.Most important of all is the inaugural and closing day work that takes a long time.I am in a difficult working environment now and working full- time. Sometimes I do not go home at night.
I ask you to give me another chance to get my homework done. Since this tournament takes two weeks, I can submit my homework three weeks later.
I look forward to hearing from you soon if possible.
Your sincerely
Daniali
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- Your local hospital has advertised people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital.You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.Write a letter to the hospital.In your letter explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital 64
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
- Nowadays the mobile phone plays a major role in our lives which brings many benefits to us but also contains some drawbacks Both these sides will discussed in this essay 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
... delivery was two weeks later, July 7th.But I cant give you my homework on time. I ...
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...ery was two weeks later, July 7th.But I cant give you my homework on time. I apologi...
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...work on time. I apologize for the delay.And I hope I can make up for this delay. ...
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...ager at a sports club near my home.This years volleyball state championships at this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77248677249 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88764824029 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.010256729 44.8134815571 297% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138066779492 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072747151884 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532620656982 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828302372775 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381055967161 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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