Internet has brought both advantages and disadvantages to the world. Internet is feasible and most accessible devise and it gives easy connectivity. It is important for both students and working people, you can find an important piece of information effectively and efficiently within friction of seconds. for students online exams are also available besides its a boon for working environment. people can work without going to office i.e work from home. In cases of emergencies its a boon. One can easily access any data or information sitting at home thus it could be the source of entertainment too.
On the other hand, some believe that its detrimental in some ways. With the increased use of internet people are glued with their gadgets. This impact social life too which involves no time for family and friends. world is busy searching information weather it is of use or not. Young children are busy playing games. Most important fact is usage of internet is expensive in other ways like expensive mobile phones, laptops and notepads which is not even easy to dispose and not biodegradable. It is more threatened to viruses and more chances of getting hacked
To conclude the usage of internet should be used responsibly otherwise its a threat to personal life too. In my opinion weightage is taken by advantages if use wisely and withing limits.
- Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the Western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by the government and individuals? 88
- Some people say that Internet is the most important invention. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people say that Internet is the most important invention. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- In some countries with widespread use if internet, people are able to work or study from home, instead of having to travel to work or college. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages? Discuss and state your own opinion. 22
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: For
...efficiently within friction of seconds. for students online exams are also availabl...
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Suggestion: it's; it is
...online exams are also available besides its a boon for working environment. people ...
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Suggestion: People
...des its a boon for working environment. people can work without going to office i.e wo...
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Suggestion: it's; it is
...work from home. In cases of emergencies its a boon. One can easily access any data ...
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Suggestion: World
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Suggestion: it's; it is
...et should be used responsibly otherwise its a threat to personal life too. In my op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, second, so, thus, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01769911504 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78898687757 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628318584071 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7259140048 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144589223201 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430455169329 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454239276042 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854221654423 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402091041817 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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