From antiquity, it is a long going argument that tidiness is a symbol of organized and civilized population. I partially agree with forth said view, In my opinion it is a personal choice of the individuals and what suits them accordingly.
Firstly, an civilized society always saty conscious about their cleanliness and how each thing should be organized. This practice make the developed countries a sutable place to live without chaos. Secondly, having a decipilned system and punctuality also vital for the goal achivements. For instance, these things are very beneficial for the important military activities. Lastly, an clean environment make every thing look beautiful and adorable, people love to visit clean and decorative house.
On the other hand, It is not nesseccry that a messy person in not creative or intelligent, it is an scientific research in 2006 that people with messy workplace are seventy percent more creative and intelligent. For example legends like Steve Jobs, Einstine and Bill Gates always had a disorganized desk while working. Nevertheless,
some people feel that, to keeping things always in a perfect manner is a waste of time, and that time they can utilize in some other productive way.
To encapsulate my opinion, with every thing at correct place and organised we can ease our life, however its a self choice and not mandatory.
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...ple feel that, to keeping things always in a perfect manner is a waste of time, and that time they ...
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...organised we can ease our life, however its a self choice and not mandatory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19369369369 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85001320663 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.48864875 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.818181818 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9090909091 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150467118671 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459586167769 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400963403059 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773345251736 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275966676819 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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