It is observed that around the globe, the number of people not having enough exposer of physical activities, specifically, exercising less is the major concern for doctors nowadays. For the vitality, a healthy body is must and we should emphasize for the betterment of it. In this essay, certain problematic factors and probable solutions will be discussed.
To embark upon, individuals have a lack of time in this fast-paced era, where health stay always on a stake from the one or the other factor like from earning money to intake of food. In the current corporate culture, work demand sitting for long hours in front of screens. Ultimately, the pressure to achieve targets and starve of good position in office-bound employees to spend less time on their health, similarly, students do not have time from their regular studies. Apart from this, The easiness and convenience provided by new technology and inventions has reduced the physical efforts as well. In a recent article from prominent "The Times", people are now more porn to the lazy lifestyle in comparison to our ancestors, who used to work on fields and army. Consequently, diet disorders and not being active resulted in chronic diseases like obesity, thyroid and many more.
On the other hand, there are several possible ways to indulge self into any physical exercise, for instance, you can take any recreational activity like dancing, hiking, cycling as a mean of doing something interesting and valuable. Apart from this, nowadays various social media trends are on the boom, like walking a thousand steps a day or taking part in a marathon can also encourage the workers towards healthy steps. Moreover, organizations can provide various consultations from the experts in office areas, so that the people can also think for their health perspective. In an empirical survey by London's "Oxford University", ascertain that around sixty-seven percent of the population who involve in a daily yoga session or cardio exercise, obtain benefits in a tremendous manner, and it took only thirty minutes of their day, which is also recommended by doctors too. Certainly, at least some amount of time should be invested for healthy life matters as well.
To conclude, It is vital to have a healthy body, because life depends on it, with only money and luxury one cannot enjoy life in full way, so and fundamental step towards healthy living is exercise and good diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, apart from, at least, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12718204489 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78722011446 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613466334165 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3775203149 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.066666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135840497643 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431607945725 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387321948143 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726644919534 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457670415002 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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