It is a commonly held belief that home and workplace should be clean and all the things must be organized in their right place. However, there can be another opinion that cleaning is not important and has no influence on home or work. I strongly believe that keeping your home and workplace as clean as possible is essential and it cannot be the other way around.
First of all, we were always taught to look after ourselves and things that surround us. It is quite important to bring up organizational skills in oneself. Needless to say, that keeping home tidy is not only good for our health but also clean workpace influences our work efficiency. For this reason, I think it is important to sort everything out and to put belongings in their right place. Having clean home helps when guests arrive out of the blue, being organized in the workplace helps when there is an urgent meeting or some documents should be taken out and revised with manager.
I believe, that coming to a house where everything is clattered and scattered around the floor is not the very best first impression a host can give to a guest. Additionally, untidy workplace shows irresponsibility of the worker. Hence, how the work can be done in a such messy place if the person cannot even organize his own workplace properly. Some articles state that our home and workplace reflect the way we feel about life in general, for instance, if the workplace is filthy, then maybe the person is not sure whether it is the right job for them or the person is hesitated to talk about it and sort it out.
To conclude, being organized is not something that can be learned from books, it is a personality trait that matures with time and experience. I believe it is highly important to stay disciplined and keep our home and workplace clean every day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
...rtant to sort everything out and to put personal belongings to their right place. Having clean home...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, for instance, i think, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69934640523 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60131540052 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545751633987 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.894338713 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244268358874 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789046049188 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476382312659 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144232374611 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300961262413 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.