Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Although some individuals try to judge an individual's background like their traditions, values, and other aspects of their life by the way they dress; I do not agree with this way of knowing people. In this essay, I will discuss why these conclusions cannot be drawn at this time of age.
While a few years ago, many valued their cultural and national dresses a lot, it is becoming a thing of the past these days. Presently, as the world is becoming a global village, people are adopting the same dress worldwide. For instance, a person wearing a western dress can be seen anywhere whether it be in any part of the world. This results in hiding their cultural background, lifestyle, and their traditions. Therefore, it will be a vague idea to judge people based on their attire.
Furthermore, I strongly believe that a person's attire reveals more about his condition rather than his past. For example, if a person is wearing torn-up apparel, maybe he or she is struggling financially. On the other hand, if the person is dressed up in the latest and trendy clothes, it speaks that his or her wealth status is of the rich class. However, in both conditions, it will be difficult to have any idea about where they come from or even about their religion. Hence, it is better to get to know other people instead of labelling them by their choice of clothes.
In conclusion, while a person's dressing can give ideas about their wealth status and status quo, it gives no information about their culture and upbringing as the world has now adopted similar dressing styles. Consequently, it is not wise to judge others by their clothes nowadays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75524475524 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60478950366 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6117128978 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193747593085 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653723124091 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355445310952 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116854293268 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327888969046 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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