Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It is argued by many that you can tell a person's disposition and tradition through their choice of clothes. In my opining, I also agree to this that it is possible to tell a person's identity and culture through what they wear including a ripped jeans for a gangster and a traditional attire for a native man.
Firstly, it is often said that we are addressed the way we are dressed. In this regard, most of our younger ones who likes to be seen as gangsters tend to wear ripped jeans and mostly torn clothes as the trending fashion blend. For instance, if you go to the streets of newyork today, you tend to see many youths putting on ripped jeans and majority of them are gangsters. In essence, you can easily identity one by spotting their jean if it is ripped or not.
Another point to consider is the fact that most traditional men actually like to wear their traditional or native attire when going out. They believe that their attire is a real definition of what they stand for. It reveals their identity and tells a lot about their personality being a native of so and so. For example, our most popular Nollywood actor, the veteran Pete edochie always like to be seen on his signature red cap and heavy beads on his neck as he has said several times that he is a red cap chief and likes to be seen on his traditional attire so whenever he is going, he can be accorded with such respect.
To conclude, Although people may vary in their opinion, I believe that certain cloths can actually tell a lot about a persons nature and tradition of which a native attire can help identify a native chief and a ripped jean to a gangster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, may, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41584158416 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39850676243 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498349834983 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3901276316 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.636363636 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143614264533 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675802637455 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542168236006 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105029176588 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509000770978 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.