When studying a person's culture and character, their choice of clothe is a feasible solution. However, how much we can watch inside of people by thier apparells is still in question as my concern. Since we are living in a modernized society with rapid development, personal features may be more invisible due to industrial clothing produciton and different ocassions.
To begin with, few people would make clothe by their own hands. Due to the advanced clothing industry, China for instance, annualy exports over 2 billion shirts to the world. Thus you may easily buy the same clothe with others which could not express you own style. Besides, due to the fashion trend evolves, more and more apparels are becoming simpler and easier to wear, which more hardly to show ones' charachter or culture. This is not because they do not want to do so, but the world is changing, which overlook singles while emphasize groups, which also benefit large scale clothing manufacturing.
Addtionally,there are more and more ocassions for people to wear clothe they have to, which we can not really tell something about them with their clothes. Leave the new couples on the wedding alone, people at work need to wear suitable clothe like suits instead of T-shirt. In the bank, you can never see a clerk wearing slippers since it is forbiden. Thus you may not tell their culture or charater merely from apparells. Especially in China, people working at government should wear simply and seriously, in order to shape the people's servant figure togehter , most of officials' apparences are looked the same.
At last, maybe you can find some clue of a teenagers' culture and character because they are young and energetic, while for most people with different ocassions, it is still a hard work for us to do so.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 17, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
When studying a persons culture and character, their choice of ...
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Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rts over 2 billion shirts to the world. Thus you may easily buy the same clothe with...
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Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...e clothing manufacturing. Addtionally,there are more and more ocassions for people ...
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Line 6, column 354, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... wearing slippers since it is forbiden. Thus you may not tell their culture or chara...
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Line 6, column 486, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people working at government should wear simply and seriously, in order to shape...
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Line 6, column 498, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng at government should wear simply and seriously, in order to shape the peoples...
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Line 6, column 533, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...y and seriously, in order to shape the peoples servant figure togehter , most of offic...
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Line 6, column 564, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hape the peoples servant figure togehter , most of officials apparences are looked...
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Line 6, column 567, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the officials') or simply say ''most officials''.
Suggestion: most of the officials; most officials
...e the peoples servant figure togehter , most of officials apparences are looked the same. At l...
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Line 8, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
...last, maybe you can find some clue of a teenagers culture and character because they are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, thus, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94059405941 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56398173497 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4834013231 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.928571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267991816288 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950470262094 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699565027635 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157161787628 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275817403019 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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