Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
It is increasingly common nowadays for people to spend a major portion of their time and resources on their wardrobe selection. Many people argue that the outer appearance of a person reflect a lot about one's background and personality. In my opinion, the choice of clothing encompasses a good portion of a person's life and therefore I believe that it is decisive in contemplating about his or her culture and overall character because nations around the world portray their culture by adopting a unified appearance on special occasions and that the outlook of a person signals a lot about a his or her character.
Firstly, for centuries, the nations have been engaging in celebrating their cultural events using a foundation of underlined principles. One of those principles require their community to adopt a certain clothing style which distinguishes their culture from another. For example, every year muslims all around the world wear a pair of white clothing to mark the start of their festival where everyone celebrates the completion of one month of fasting. Furthermore, in India, people wear a special linen in orange color to celebrate the birth of their Gods. For these reasons, the choice of clothing is paramount in telling a lot about a person's background and culture.
Secondly, the character of a person is very evident from a person's personality these days. The nature of clothing preferred by a person could reflect many things about his traits and preferences. For example, workplaces nowadays mandate their employees to adopt a professional outlook by wearing a strict formal clothing which indicates a person's discipline and commitment to his daily routine. Similarly, people with torn and loose clothing could give away a sense of laziness to people around them. Therefore, a person's character is evident from their wardrobe selection.
To conclude, I agree that a person's outer appearance is paramount in capturing one's background and personal character because people carry with them a sense of their culture which is evident from their clothing and that it also tells a lot about his or her character as people with certain lifestyle choices adopt a certain appearance which distinguish them from the others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2044198895 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85953636113 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458563535912 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.1539122059 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.571428571 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329932262234 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129969672985 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775081745108 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235665183275 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490116403352 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.