Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
It is increasingly common for people nowadays to plan their vacations in extreme places where life conditions are intricate. This essay will discuss the merits and drawbacks of visiting such places by the tourists.
One of the main benefits that allow people to visit such extreme places where survival is difficult is to feel the satisfaction that one feels after achieving an impossible feat or a challenge. We live in a society where majority of the people have steady and monotonous jobs which are, at times, non-challenging and therefore people are constantly seeking new purposes in life. Challenges of visiting extreme places give people a sense of purpose in life and allow them to feel the gratification after achieving it. Further, visiting such places also enable some people to get some fame in their life. For example, people who go to Mount Everest or Amazon quite get famous after going through an impossible series of challenges which makes them popular among their community and sometimes in the world.
However, there are quite serious drawbacks of visiting places with such harshful survival conditions. At first, there is a lot of preparation and training that one has to go through before embarking on their difficult journey which require an extensive amount of time and commitment. That means leaving less time for the other important aspects in their life like jobs and families. Further, these places have extreme weather and environmental conditions which render the human survival quite difficult. In some cases, serious injuries could occur to the tourists which may result in permanent disability or even death. For instance, there have been incidents in last year, as per National Geographic, where people have died while climbing Mount Everest and K-2 Peak. It has also been reported that some people died in the Amazon during animal attacks.
In conclusion, there are some merits of going through such difficult expeditions where people can achieve a true sense out of their life and increase their popularity; while at the same time there are some drawbacks of going to such extreme places as it requires a lot of time and preparation and may result in disability or death due to harshful surrounding conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14441416894 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65983323857 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479564032698 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8141856473 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.866666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23347276164 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928312033638 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688890965291 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168817274292 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471210002588 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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