Money is the fuel on which the world runs. A certain number of people believe that money is the source of happiness in life, however, there are alternative ways to get the level of happiness in your lives. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for money and other ways that give happiness to individuals in their entire life.
Apparently, money is the medium of exchange in buying products from the market. The more money a person has, the more happiness he or she gets in their lives. And I have reasons with examples to substantiate it. Not every person can buy their desired products because every individual is not rich and wealthy. In other words, a wealthy person can pay for international tours, shopping on branded outlets, throwing parties, and so on without worrying about their monthly budget unlike middle or lower-class people who cannot get these things because of lack of money and liabilities on themselves. Besides, people always wanted to be affluent in order to complete their desired hands down.
Conversely, there are others ways to achieve the level of happiness in life such as getting inner peace and satisfaction. Inner peace comes from multifarious ways in a person’s life. And, in my life, it comes from the art of helping and giving support to destitute people in a way of providing one-time home-cooked meals from my home to poor and needy people who are in the search of food on the streets. Another way of happiness is that getting satisfaction in a life, which mostly comes from achieving goals in your life. By accomplishing your goals, you can enjoy a moment of happiness in your life that comes after completing a goal in your life.
To conclude, in my opinion, although money provides us to buy our desires, it does not give you a complete amount of joy in your life whereas inner peace and satisfaction in your life could give the level of happiness in your life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, conversely, however, if, so, whereas, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75975975976 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60253137656 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492492492492 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4353384996 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348433200304 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124645485248 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703809688001 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225349823313 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776307250391 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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