Some people say that modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
Technical advancements has brought significant changes that totally altered the lives of people. it is provided that the old newspapers would be replaced with more advanced technology. While i believe that the rising trend of reading electronic books has some demerits, the considerable merits that is being provided by modern automation can not be ignored.
On the one hand, The evolution of e-books has brought several disadvantsges. Firstly, Nowadays, majority of people browse internet as it can be easily accessed by everyone. so, people prefer to read newspapers online instead of buy from the publishing agencies, therefore, it can close down the publishing agencies when no one will buy printed newspapers. Secondly, From elders' perspective, they are not more techno-say and are not able to operate gagets such as cell phones or computer and for them newspapers are an attractive option. Moreover, reading newspaper in the morning with cup of tea is the enjoyment for older ones. Hence, relpacement of printed material with online newspapers would dissapoint them. Finally, printing and selling newspapers is an integral part of economy of the country that contributes the economic development of the country. On the contrary, it will have a negative impact on the nation as a whole.
On the other hand, Along with disadvantages, there are some advantages attached with the use of modern technology. First of all, online newspapers provides ease to people as it is a cheaper source, and people do not need to spend extra money to by printed version. As a result, people do not make efforts to go anywhere buying papers or magazines, they rather prioritize downloading application to access online. Additionally, In these days people, especially, young ones do not like to read books, magazines, newspapers as they do not have reading habits. so, they have more tendency to surf on the internet. Last but not least, automation has brought convenience by revoluting internet as even if people want to find old news, they can easily search online.
To conclude, Although technology has brought ease and convenience in lives of people, the role of newspapers can not be overlooked which are still loved by senior citizons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, such as, as a result, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21111111111 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8937779143 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552777777778 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6604807074 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204497223073 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556852377906 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326627343723 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110300066045 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232095450403 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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