Some People say that money make can make life easier and more comfortable. But others say that having a great amount of wealth can bring some problems. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of money?
It is an undeniable fact that since the invention of currency, people have been both enjoying economic benefits and encountering financial problems. In my point of view, a great amount of money does enable an individual to lead a more decent life but it is also an origin of envoy, stress, conflict, and crime.
On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that money ensures a higher standard of living. This is especially evident from the shift of role that women play in modern society. Not satisfied with the traditional responsibilities of housewives, many women have entered the workforce by taking-up part-time and full-time jobs. With a double and steady income, couples can readily buy a house and all the luxuries they dream such as splendid sports cars and magnificent home theater. That is the very reason Why the accumulation of wealth has become the most important goal in many people lives.
On the other hand, money is always straining interpersonal relationships and even causing human tragedies. Take an extended family as an example. If one of the siblings is a high earning careerist and enjoys all the pleasure of life while the other siblings still lead a rather modest existence, that sibling will undoubtedly become the source of envy and focus of jealousy. Moreover, wealth becomes the bone of contention when it comes to massive inheritance upon the death of parents where one child is trying to get a larger share than the others. What is appalling, unable to resist the temptation of wealth some adolescents and adults are lured to crime in hope of achieving instant money.
In conclusion, personal wealth, with all its merits and demerits can have a double-edged impact on our lives. Therefore, it is suggested that while pursuing wealth to improve their living standards, people should be fully aware of all the pitfalls that are associated with excessive wealth.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01265822785 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76494641853 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623417721519 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2352017142 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193422200429 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566794110358 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407981357002 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107460287791 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203634175999 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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