There subsists numerous ways of bringing people closer, out of which one is music. People feel that music cultivates a sense of togetherness, regardless of their cultural background or age. This essay will explore constructive arguments in the forthcoming paragraphs to support the above notion wholeheartedly.
Undoubtedly, music has no language of a particular country or region. People follow its rhythm more than words and therefore, music has reached national boundaries. Perhaps the best example of this would be Hoola concert that took place 4 years ago in the US and the UK, which engaged international audience, and was a massive success. In addition to this, people from different countries are joining music schools to learn music. 'Violin Play' in China, a popular school teaches international music to all its students. This is a clear evidence that shows music is a universal language.
Not only culture, but music has its exceptional ability to bind people together of different generations. Even if the people vary in ages, they enjoy the melody that have the same magical effect on them. This would explain why TV shows such as 'X Factor' and 'Music Talent' are so popular. These sources of entertainment attract incredibly broad audiences because singing appeal to children, parents and grandparents alike. No other form of entertainment can bring families together in this manner.
In conclusion, music is an important part of life which plays a significant role in uniting people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91885632093 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679166666667 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0047858843 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232079912149 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806267039481 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744297918924 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132814631049 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661669559886 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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