Some people say that now we can see films on our phones and tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Other say that to be fully enjoyed , Films need to be seen in a cinema
Entertainment has become an inevitable stress buster, while some people are more comfortable in watching movies through hand gadgets, varies some people are still finding enjoyment in Cinemas . The ensuing paragraph of this essay will discuss both views objectively, before arriving at a conclusion.
At a glance, some individuals are delighted to watch movies on gadgets rather through theatre, As it is financially beneficial and time saving one and the current generation are too stingy in spending time and feeling hard to go out so they find this as an alternative one . To cite a shining example Amazon prime is a good platform, where one can avail multiple choice of movies. Adding to that, An yearly subscription of that is quite cheaper than the two tickets of movie on big screen. Therefore watching a film is a compelling preposition for many price conscious and busy professionals.
On Deeper inspection, The cinematic experience on the big screen is far more impressive one than the small screen. Visiting and witnessing a film in a well equipped cinema has its own advantage. The expensive sound systems and visual treat will make a person absorbed into the story.. To substantiate my view, The sound quality and comfortable seat with various camera angle will make us to feel even the subtle element of the movie, Which gives lavish experience to the people and this can only possible in theatres
In conclusion, This essay has apty emphasized that cinema has an edge over hand gadgets and one can have real enjoyment only through cinema.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05813953488 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78228493642 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631782945736 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.4358068408 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130275425293 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047036040511 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518916734735 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871440246233 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307120048507 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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