Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Movies, which are one of the best ways to rejuvenate an individual's mind, are gaining grounds in this day and age and different masses prefer different ways to enjoy the same. The world remain polarised between two sections where one section of people perceives that it is better to watch films on laptops or mobiles rather than in cinema while other section including me condemn this proposition as to enjoy a movie to the fullest, theatres are better which is being a elucidated in the forthcoming paragraphs.
At the outset, adherents of watching films on small screen deem that it is convenient as one can enjoy a movie anywhere or anytime on phones or tablets which is not the case for seeing it in cinemas as there is a particular time of show at a particular place. To watch a film in theatre, for instance, one has to take some time off from their busy schedule; however, on laptops and other gadgets one can enjoy whenever he has free time. That is why, they prefer small screens over big ones.
On the contrary, is there something that a person is missing out, if he does not see a movie in cinema. Certainly, there is a world of difference in experience as the audio and visuals there are of HD quality which is not possible for phones or laptops. To cite an example, Padmaavat, blockbuster Hindi movie, was a 3-D movie which provides an alluring experience only in cinemas as one cannot enjoy 3-D movies on other gadgets. Hence, I deem that theatre bestow an extraordinary experience.
To conclude, although on phones or laptops one can enjoy films whenever and wherever he wants, I still perceive that theatre is better option to experience a movie at its best.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 469, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, still, while, as to, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67003367003 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59970165295 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525252525253 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8687826049 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.7 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168002777666 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633162190481 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485482055973 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103683133784 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234439184324 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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