Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
Life, which is full of vicissitudes, is affected by a plethora of exterior things out of which money is believed to be on the top of the list to make someone jubilant. This essay, along with the reasons for the same will elucidate other factors that contribute a lot to an individual's content.
At the outset, by being affluent, masses can get themselves a life full of comforts and luxuries, thereby providing them a sense of joy as in this day and age people usually becomes happy by owning a designer bag, watch, car or a mansion which merely can be purchased if an individual has substantial amount of money in his bank account. Mukesh Ambani who is the richest man of India, for instance, is often seen happy as he does not have to worry about his rudimentary requirements; however is leading a hasslefree and contented life by having air conditioners, soft beds, cars, etcetera. Therefore, money is considered as an essential in order to live happily.
What's more, is owning a hefty amount of money mainly responsible for the jubilance of an individual? Certainly not as there are umpteen other factors as well. Firstly, by having an understanding and caring better half an individual can spend a joyful life as there will be less conflicts as they will see things eye to eye. To cite an example, an article in the Hindu, one of them not only most authentic but also sought after newspapers of India, showed that the rate of happiness mounts by 60%, if a person has the right life partner. Secondly, health also plays a pivotal role as an individual cannot remain jovial if he is suffering from any kind of malady. A good illustration of this is the individuals in their golden age as after a certain age they start having ailments like cardiovascular diseases, joint pains etcetera, whereby causing them pain while on the contrary, Masses free from any malady enjoys their life joyfully. That is why, health and the relationship adds a lot to a person's joy.
To conclude, although having a hefty amount of pecuniary will indeed buy all the luxuries and basic requirements to stay cheerful, a perfect bond between partners and well-being are the basics to enjoy the ecstatic days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76377952756 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74301446981 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58530183727 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.604379716 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.615384615 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3076923077 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267744776901 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794728920477 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495633044869 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145101625154 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687351727599 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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