Some people recognize,working or travelling through foreign coutries as a compelling cause for individuals in order to learning a new language,conversely,others harshly critique the former viewpoint as they genuinely agree foreign languages can be learned at a service of evolving in various fields. I support the latter assertion on the account of believing this truism that individuals' goals for being a bi-lingual, tri-lingual or multi-lingual person are not absolutely tightened to a subject of working or tavelling abroad.however, countless reasons ranging from scholarship to potent personal aims can be highly encouraging for some to pick up on learning an entirely new language.
To commence, let me put a light on first idealogy which is totaly supportrd by some.These people are of the opionion that learning a new language is merely restricted to the zone of travelling or working overseas.To follow this opinion, for clearing things up, I would mention the importance of knowing the language of the country that you favor to live or work in, which is avoiding any potential misinterpreting.To put it more simply if any person fancies living or working in a country with an unfamiliar language, it is absoultely vital for that person to know that language for being in a sefe zone of undesrtanging about going on spoken conversations or interactions between people.therefore,these people are highly determined learning that new languge ,which they are in need of speaking it in a total new envirionment.
Despite the first viewpoint, others hold a various belief as they argue other leading causes can be encouraging for individuals to learn a new language.To deem the first cause, I would highlight the purpose of pursuing study programme in other countries ,which need a satisfying level of profeciency in that language and it should be proven by a valid certification.hence these people ought to become a fluent user in that novel language.
Futher and frequent, some people take up learning languages as a lesiure persuit since they are in love with learning new things, besides they believe learning a new language could provide them the chance of being familiar with a new culture and it would bring them a huge enjoyment as well as a sense of pleasure. Moreover, its highly proven by sceientists that learning a new language can decline mental disorders by 37 percent.a recent reaserch which is conducted by a group of Australlian linguists,has proved that people who know a second or a third language would be in a low risk of suffering from dementia,which is a mental disorder when they get old.
By way of conclusion, while some people think there is a strong link between learning a foreign language and working or travelling in foreign nations, it seems to me more genuine, individuals' purposes for learning a new languge can be related to educational issues, advancing their memories or any other personal aims.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , working
Some people recognize,working or travelling through foreign coutries ...
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Suggestion: , conversely
...uals in order to learning a new language,conversely,others harshly critique the former view...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n entirely new language. To commence, let me put a light on first idealogy whi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...alogy which is totaly supportrd by some.These people are of the opionion that learnin...
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Suggestion: To
... zone of travelling or working overseas.To follow this opinion, for clearing thing...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... avoiding any potential misinterpreting.To put it more simply if any person fancie...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...put it more simply if any person fancies living or working in a country with an...
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...ore simply if any person fancies living or working in a country with an unfamil...
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...f any person fancies living or working in a country with an unfamiliar language...
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Suggestion: , these
...or interactions between people.therefore,these people are highly determined learning t...
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...hly determined learning that new languge ,which they are in need of speaking it i...
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...ning that new languge ,which they are in need of speaking it in a total new envir...
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Suggestion: To
...for individuals to learn a new language.To deem the first cause, I would highlight...
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...suing study programme in other countries ,which need a satisfying level of profeci...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...familiar with a new culture and it would bring them a huge enjoyment as well as a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , has
...cted by a group of Australlian linguists,has proved that people who know a second or...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...in a low risk of suffering from dementia,which is a mental disorder when they get old....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, conversely, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2481.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 477.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20125786164 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35211800249 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513626834382 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 762.3 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.731822586 49.4020404114 356% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 354.428571429 106.682146367 332% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.1428571429 20.7667163134 328% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.8571428571 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280421485434 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156560530318 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710969823064 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178072855349 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050889323958 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.1 13.0946893788 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 50.2224549098 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.15 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , working
Some people recognize,working or travelling through foreign coutries ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , conversely
...uals in order to learning a new language,conversely,others harshly critique the former view...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n entirely new language. To commence, let me put a light on first idealogy whi...
^^
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...alogy which is totaly supportrd by some.These people are of the opionion that learnin...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... zone of travelling or working overseas.To follow this opinion, for clearing thing...
^^
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... avoiding any potential misinterpreting.To put it more simply if any person fancie...
^^
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...put it more simply if any person fancies living or working in a country with an...
^^
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore simply if any person fancies living or working in a country with an unfamil...
^^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f any person fancies living or working in a country with an unfamiliar language...
^^
Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , these
...or interactions between people.therefore,these people are highly determined learning t...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 763, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hly determined learning that new languge ,which they are in need of speaking it i...
^^
Line 3, column 782, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ning that new languge ,which they are in need of speaking it in a total new envir...
^^
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...for individuals to learn a new language.To deem the first cause, I would highlight...
^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...suing study programme in other countries ,which need a satisfying level of profeci...
^^
Line 6, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...familiar with a new culture and it would bring them a huge enjoyment as well as a...
^^
Line 6, column 503, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , has
...cted by a group of Australlian linguists,has proved that people who know a second or...
^^^^
Line 6, column 614, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...in a low risk of suffering from dementia,which is a mental disorder when they get old....
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, conversely, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2481.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 477.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20125786164 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35211800249 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513626834382 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 762.3 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.731822586 49.4020404114 356% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 354.428571429 106.682146367 332% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.1428571429 20.7667163134 328% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.8571428571 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280421485434 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156560530318 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710969823064 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178072855349 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050889323958 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.1 13.0946893788 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 50.2224549098 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.15 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.