Some people say a person’s success in adult life is the result of the way they brought up as a child by their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary era, every teenager want to take their own decision, sometimes by overruling their parents decisions too. Some people believe that adults’ can only succeeded if they bout up well by their parents, when they are children. I partially agrees to said statement because adults surrounding also plays the prominent role in terms of getting success. However, Parents are tying their best to bred their children to be the successful person and therefore I can not overlook their role.
Many of the adults are not successful and or living discontent life, because they are heavily influenced by some wrong habits and relationships. In this case, no matter how well adults’ parents brought them, still they would not achieve success. For example, metro cities adults often be in the relationship with glamorous people which could be the cause of their failure in life. Some adults also come from the decent family background and highly knowledgeable in respective field, though they could not resist to live predefined lifestyle like their rich friends which is the ultimate reason of not being the successful person.
Though, there are several cases where one achieves success only as a result of good parenting strategies. Some parent develop their children’s will power at the level where there will be no chance of getting influenced by their surrounding. Eventually, when children grow those good habits are so indoctrinated in their mind and behaviour that it seems impossible for them to face any failure. For instance, the Hindu society’s parent’s bred their children in the way that little good habits will get them success in long run, no matter which culture they will assimilate with.
To conclude, it is the mere play of once belief and the strength of the taught beliefs. My inclination towards the first point is bit high because there are only a few ethnic groups which can really ready to put the required efforts in terms of breeding their offspring well so that they would touch the sky.
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- In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. what problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society?What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among the young 89
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- Online education and training is becoming increasingly popular in the business world Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o. Some people believe that adults' can only succeeded if they bout up well ...
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Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
...ts, when they are children. I partially agrees to said statement because adults surro...
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Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they are children. I partially agrees to said statement because adults surroundin...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be often
...ccess. For example, metro cities adults often be in the relationship with glamorous peop...
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Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'resist living'.
Suggestion: resist living
...respective field, though they could not resist to live predefined lifestyle like their rich fr...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of not being the successful person. Though, there are several cases where one achi...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
... inclination towards the first point is bit high because there are only a few ethni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, really, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12835820896 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70881994646 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.852780146 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.714285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29810012689 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107743282195 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703736351143 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172766306683 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092848125142 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.