Some people say that tourists cannot learn very much about a place from visiting it on holiday. Others say that they can learn a lot. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Today, annual holidays is a way of life. People go on vacation to see place and relax. Many people think it is not possible for tourist to learn on holiday but others think it is possible to learn many things. This essay will discuss both the views and give my opinion.
To begin with, a vistor on holiday can not learn much on their holidays. Firstly, they will be busy with their family and seeing places so to learn on holiday is getting more stress. Secondly, most people choose place to have a relaxing time not for education. For example, going to Disneyland is only for fun for family and children. A great way for everyone to eat and have fun in the parks. Therefore, holiday can not teach anything.
However, some people chose vacation spot for learning purpose because of interest in learning. History learning or yoga learning maybe interest for people and they go on specific holiday to learn while they rest. A trip to India for example can teach a lot about culture, festival and food. They can also learn about to sing meditate or learn yoga. So, some people prefer to go on holiday to enjoy and learn together.
To conclude, everybody will have different goal for their holiday. Some go to just have fun trip and some go for learning trip. In my opinion, I think holiday must be all about having fun but learning a little about the country tradition, value will not harm. Moreover, holidays can create a lifetime experience and excitement to if they manage to enjoy and learn.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uss both the views and give my opinion. To begin with, a vistor on holiday can n...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to vacation'
Suggestion: to vacation
... anything. However, some people chose vacation spot for learning purpose because of in...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to trip'
Suggestion: to trip
... have fun trip and some go for learning trip. In my opinion, I think holiday must be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61048689139 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29232453745 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50936329588 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9645298972 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.7894736842 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0526315789 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357671603363 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123748449655 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074265376061 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240615355848 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658876155327 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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