It is indeed true that sports and conventional contests, who emburse huge amounts of cash to join these tournaments, are always enticed large number of onlookers. Yet, I firmly believe that it is a positive trend for following reasons.
Nowadays, we are living in highly competitive society, owing to this relaxation and comfort time and sources have both shrunk. Therefore, these competitions render an opportunity to banish burden of work and study and replenish physical and psychological energy as well. Secondly, such events aid to reemerge the patriotic sense towards specefic region, religion, and country which is extremely important in this contemporary era to perserve our culture and sport. In other words, expending money to these events yield fruitful results for both individual and society.
On the other hand, people who vilify these spending as negative trend hold some strict arguments. First is, whole money can be spent to enhance education, helath, and infrastructure of the particular region that may prove worthwhile for the economy of the country. What is more, sometimes spectator fall prey to unwanted incidents which resulted human casualities and other serious problems. For instance: during F1 races cars often clash and cause harm to viewers.
To conclude, games and traditional events are always influenced our life in myriad ways, thus, paying for tickets to watch is obiviously benefited.
- The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree? 11
- The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree? 11
- The inequality between rich and poor nations is now wider than it has ever been before what do you think are the main causes of this difference and what do you think can be done to reduce the gap 74
- Some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events. Is this good or bad thing. 56
- You are ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks agobut you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service sayWhen and how you ordered the cheque bookAsk how long will have to waitAsk the manager what ac 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ookers. Yet, I firmly believe that it is a positive trend for following reasons. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in other words, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45495495495 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77610898659 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720720720721 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9949739718 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.090909091 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116433664444 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359274122556 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391506805961 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554174231678 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251743674387 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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