Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfiction about the service that your bank has afforded to me.
Actually, All cheques from my old cheque book had been cashed, thus,I applied for new one approximately 2 weeks ago.They pledged me to provide it within a week, But to my frustation, It is still not issued to my name. Owing to this, I was encountered with some serious transaction delay that could have facilitated seamlessly through cheque.
I want to know the causes of this inconvenience and what measure you have taken to tackle this issue. What is more,how much time it will take to entrust new copy to me, so that I can manage my further deals.
Prompt action would be appreciated. I am looking forward to hear you.
Yours faithfully,
Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lly, All cheques from my old cheque book had been cashed, thus,I applied for new ...
^^
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...y old cheque book had been cashed, thus,I applied for new one approximately 2 wee...
^^
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...d for new one approximately 2 weeks ago.They pledged me to provide it within a week,...
^^^^
Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , how
...taken to tackle this issue. What is more,how much time it will take to entrust new c...
^^^^
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ld be appreciated. I am looking forward to hear you. Yours faithfully, Smith
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, look, so, still, thus, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 641.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 135.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74814814815 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77413093944 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.777777777778 0.622605031667 125% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2721691579 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.125 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251157555708 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850469811974 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471272000859 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129233536468 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043589919454 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.