Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible.
Ensuring an adequate quantity of food supply has always been a concern for nations. A significant number of individuals believe that a nation should prepare own food locally as much as possible rather than importing. I agree and believe that regional manufacturing will improve employment in the nation as well as the cost of a product will be lower.
Firstly, Agricultural activity requires farmers in large quantity, therefore boosting individuals to produce more local food will involve more people towards farming activities. As a result, unemployment issues can be minimized. For example, the government of Indonesia promotes farming and celebrates festivals in the name of agricultural activity to encourage more and more people to do farming, thus 50 per cent of youths are working under agricultural department directly or indirectly.
Secondly, the cost of manufacturing food on regional land is very low as compared with importing from other nations. Hence more food should be produced on national land to limit the inflation rate. The imported products required to pay taxes, international transportation charges and labour charges which ultimately increase the cost of the final product, unlike local food. Therefore, countries should try to avoid the import of food items.
Thirdly, imported food products required higher shelf life for transportation purposes, therefore the production of imported products involve the use of chemicals which serve the purpose of food preservation. However, use of chemicals may cause difficulties in some individuals, it is better to produce local foods
In conclusion, while, imported products might have some advantages, it is best to consume local products, therefore regional farming must be encouraged by country on a greater scale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ared with importing from other nations. Hence more food should be produced on nationa...
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...als, it is better to produce local foods In conclusion, while, imported products ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58608058608 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04306330385 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8306997273 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295729609395 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118302577733 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884665567999 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157744227762 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762660577114 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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