It is irrefutable fact that many flight companies are booming now a days whether they are private or government. According to some individuals this type of travelling should be encouraged to grow however, other critics believe that this should be restricted. I tent to think that merits of using airlines outweigh demerits. I would like to put forth my arguments to support my perspective.
Firstly, it is well known that air transportation is fastest mode compare to other modes such as water, road and so on therefore person can save significant amount of time and utilize that of their other daily tasks. Moreover, in this modern era using airlines is becoming symbol of success thus many business professionals along with white collar job holders prefer to travel in spite of worrying about hefty cost air tickets.
Secondly, planes are known for their convenience which they offer in exchange of price is quite good. Warm welcome by flight attendant is one of the unique experience that person can receive followed with comfortable sitting. In addition to that one can order food of their choice without breaking a sweat. Also restroom are provided for comfort. They provide quality service to their client thus it is a win win situation for both.
On the other hand, some people think that it should become limited can not be overlooked. Due to presence of airlines job opportunities in other types of transportation like bus,train along with boat are noticeably decreased. However, it is not everyone's cup of tea to travel via airlines because it comes with the cost. Furthermore, some tragedy occur in flight for instance many news are published regarding to accident and hijeck are not an exception.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that advantage of using airplanes is more because in short span of time one can travel worldwide. On the other side government should put surveillance on price of air travel. Ultimately it depends on individual which mode he prefer for travel.
- Interview forms are the basic selection criteria for the most large companies However some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods To what extent do you agree or disagree 96
- Some people think that air travel should grow without a limit while others believe that governments should limit it Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... that many flight companies are booming now a days whether they are private or government....
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Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...t many flight companies are booming now a days whether they are private or government....
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...some individuals this type of travelling should be encouraged to grow however, ot...
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Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat this should be restricted. I tent to think that merits of using airlines outw...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the fastest'.
Suggestion: is the fastest
...t is well known that air transportation is fastest mode compare to other modes such as wat...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... their choice without breaking a sweat. Also restroom are provided for comfort. They...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: win
...ty service to their client thus it is a win win situation for both. On the other ha...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , train
...n other types of transportation like bus,train along with boat are noticeably decrease...
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Line 7, column 377, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...me tragedy occur in flight for instance many news are published regarding to acciden...
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Line 7, column 377, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...me tragedy occur in flight for instance many news are published regarding to accident and...
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Line 9, column 269, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
... it depends on individual which mode he prefer for travel.
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Line 9, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vidual which mode he prefer for travel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in short, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99701492537 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75146490884 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573134328358 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5907119976 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212588768407 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628613430859 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931349002631 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112414233301 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569230483682 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.