Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others
believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the
future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that STEM (science, technology, engineering and mathematics) classes should be mandatory for students, while others think that students should be allowed to pick classes they like. Although STEM courses will be beneficial for students in their job search, I believe it is better for university students to choose their favorite classes to be more motivated to study.
On the one hand, STEM fields are believed to assist students in getting jobs easily. The fact is that multiple companies around the world are searching for STEM workers. As a result, students with much knowledge of STEM fields are likely to be able to apply their knowledge and get accepted for jobs quickly after their graduation. In Canada, empirical observation suggests that undergraduates with degrees in STEM receive job offers five times faster than other students in other majors. However, as everyone has different study abilities, not all students are good at and successful in STEM fields.
On the other hand, allowing students to pick their favorite classes makes students feel more motivated to study. This is because if students are encouraged to study what they like, they will look forward to attending classes every day to absorb new knowledge and gain experience. Moreover, they will be happy enough to put more effort into completing assignments and achieving high results at school. One survey in Vietnam revealed that students who were allowed to choose classes themselves did 40% better than those who were forced to attend STEM classes. Therefore, I believe this method makes education more meaningful to students.
In conclusion, despite the fact that STEM classes can ease the job search for students after their graduation, undergraduates should be allowed to choose whatever they want in order to gain more motivation for their own studies
Comments
I think every student should…
I think every student should have their own right to decide what STEM subject to choose, as they know much better what they can do best and where their motivation derives from. For example I know whom I want to become after graduation and what profession to choose, therefore I'll need some specific knowledge to apply for that position, while other skills would be unneeded. Otherwise I would look for other solutions helping me with all those endless technical assignments I don't want to mess with and that's simply pay someone to do homework using MyAssignmentLab service, as when someone is obliged to do anything, there's a natural desire to do otherwise.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24579124579 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63904340673 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538720538721 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7920903838 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.846153846 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266536738593 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102460354039 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736886097683 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186770164584 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582587561583 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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