Owing to rapid changes in lifestyle,Some folks use to commute by cars around the city while other love cycling to travel near by places.However, both have their own importance and usage.From my point of view, car is more convenient and attractive source rather than cycling.
There are manifold points which support my view.First and foremost,Car is the convenient and relaxing means of transportation. People can easily cover long journeys in short period of time by cars.Moreover,majority of people prefer to commute by cars due to the facilities it offers such as music system and, air condition during the summer season.Furthermore, car is also time saving vehicle.As per recent survey conducted by times of India revealed, 65 percent of civilians are saving around 60 hours per annually by using their cars from home to workplaces.On the top of it,Car also represent the status and value in-front of our peers in the society.Besides, people can easily travel by cars in different weather like, dark night or rainy season, without facing difficulties.
However,undoubtedly,cycle have some benefits which are highly appreciable.Cycle is quite Eco friendly for the society. It helps to prevent the pollution and parking problems around the city.In addition, cycling is a stunning source of exercise which improves the blood circulation of the body and help to burn the unused fat.in this past faced world, people do not have enough time to do exercise and outdoor activities.Hence,cycling may offer a healthy environment to keep our body fit and healthy.On the particular note,cycle do not need enough money for maintenance and easy to afford for all sorts of people among the society
After contemplating the subjected matter,cycling may have some advantages but, in sharp contrast car is more convenient and relaxing approach for the civilians to roam around the city
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53125303326 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612794612795 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 253.402762416 49.4020404114 513% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 316.8 106.682146367 297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.4 20.7667163134 286% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.2 7.06120827912 329% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238235204537 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122313601025 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045189889376 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145004847318 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360024572779 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.4 13.0946893788 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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