Irrefutably, in the digital era, where some may argue that mechanical transportation would be superior than man-made transportation. I firmly believe that cycling has more benefits and it will be discuss in this essay.
To commence with, there are various reasons to be considered that cycling vehicle are good means of transportation for people from one place to another as follows. In the case of emergency like hospitals or office work, cars would be the best opinion to travel faster even in less time. As today, people are doing multi tasking work to achieve their target, for that they must relay on faster transportation. Even though four vehicles have some other advantages like it may protect people during rainfall or storm and less injuries would be happened during collision between two vehicles. Facilities of having air conditioning, music, comfortable seating are easy available in the cars. To examplify, BBC conduct a survey in 2020, where 80% people's live had saved during accident due to using cars.
Nevertheless, on the other side, I believe that cycling has its own numerous advantages in today's life. As everybody has followed luxury lifestyle,which leads to deterioration in their health. Two vehicles comes to us as a boon in our life by adapting this habit daily, we not only maintain physical health but mental status can also be improved through exchange of fresh air. It generate the power of self learning, self doing activities within person and feel energetic all the time . Even though cycling takes time to reach upto destination and accomplishing work, but meanwhile it also learn us discipline and punctuality. For example, according to WHO, 90% heatlh problems might get cure by using of cycling because it increases blood circulation throughout the body system.
To conclude, although luxuries cars are important to reveals status symbol and for its uses but it never denay that cycling has its more hidden benefits related to health and lifestyle which reveal later on life.
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- Some people think cars are a better way of transportation around the city while other prefer cycling Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15243902439 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79101843565 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637195121951 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9061271637 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128201469586 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401469152052 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306104694797 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746678824663 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295620395801 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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